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Title: THROUGH A SON’S EYES
Author: Terry Joyce
Date Submitted: 3/28/2007

 
Poem: On tenterhooks we ate our picnic lunch
Of course mum spoiled it.
The salami’s too hot. The butter's too soft.
And, she hates pickles,
Bread would be better than buns.

On tenterhooks we ate chocolate ice-cream.
It didn’t take her long to spoil it.
The choc’s too soft,
Ice cream’s too messy.

On tenterhooks we went for a walk.
She spoiled it.
She hates the wind.
Why did we have to walk when we’ve got a car?
She does love the beach.
There she smiles and I laughed a lot, we all did.
She can be so nice yet, so frightening.

We walked back on tenterhooks.
My mum, her smiles and laughter, warmth and love
They stayed with the waves drifting off to sea.
Maybe my mum will be back at high tide.
Maybe?
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